THE HAUNTED HOUSE
Part 1
One day three kids Koby,Lee zion,and Ryan are going to a haunted house in 3 more days. Over the phone Koby said “I can not wait any longer” I said “ Me too”. Ryan said “Lee-Zion i'm coming over” I said “Are you allowed ?”. Ryan said “ No but i’m going to sneak” I said “would that get you in trouble?”. We continued talking silently I heard something “BOOM!!!”. I said “ what was that?” Ryan said “What?” I said “ I will call you back”. Ryan tried to say
something but i turned it off. I went down the staircase “BOOM!! BOOM!! BOOM!!!” I said “there it is again” “BOOM!!!” I said “ I’m getting scared” I looked in the kitchen “Meow” “It's my cat” I said. I said “case solved”.
Two days later Koby said “yay it’s time” we waited till 12:00. We were the only people there. I could already see that Ryan was scared. He said “can we go back into the car?” I said “No way” we went into the haunted house the door closed behind us and everything started to float. We heard a soft voice “I'm coming for you”. To be continued...
that was AWESOME!!!!! keep it up
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Keep the good work up.
very great writing leezion
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ReplyDeleteHi Lee zion I like how you added lots of description and you made me shiver a bit because of the scary parts. tena koutou tena koutou tena koutou katoa
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